2024年高考英语|读后续写预测——自我成长故事

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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was time for graduates to hunt for jobs. The majority of them didn’t have working experience for they had spent most of their time at school studying academic subjects. It was not until they graduated from college that they realized it was a challenge for them to land jobs. Jimmy, one of these job hunters, was a young academically excellent person. One day, after making good preparations, he went to apply for a managerial position in a big company. In spite of fierce competition, he managed to pass the first interview. What a lucky dog! Jimmy was informed to come for the next round in a few days — the last interview for the company to make the final decision. The big day finally came. He dressed neatly, the grey tie matching perfectly the decent suit. Blood rushing to his face and heart pounding heavily, he tried to calm down, and then took a few deep breaths. It was his turn. The interviewer, an elegant lady, discovered from the CV that the youth’s academic achievements were excellent all the way, from the secondary school until the postgraduate research. After several rounds of questions related to the position, she asked, “Have you ever done any part-time jobs?” “None.” After a while, the interviewer asked who paid for Jimmy’s school fees. The youth answered in a low voice, “My father passed away when I was one year old, so it was my mother who paid for all my school fees.” She continued, “What did your mother do?” “My mother worked as a clothes cleaner.” The lady requested the youth to show his hands. The youth showed a pair of hands that were smooth and perfect. The interviewer paused for a second, leaning against the chair, “Have you ever helped your mother wash the clothes before?” Ashamed, Jimmy replied, “Never. My mother always wanted me to study and read more books. Furthermore, my mother can wash clothes faster than me.” She nodded, adding, “I have a request. When you go back today, go and clean your mother’s hands, and then see me back here tomorrow morning.” 注意: 1.续写的词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Back home, Jimmy requested his mother to let him clean her hands. ___________________________________________________________ The next morning, Jimmy went to the interviewer’s office. ____________________________________________________________ 解 析 本文以人物故事发展为线索,学业优秀的Jimmy在毕业生求职激烈的竞争下,去参加工作面试脱颖而出。过五关斩六将,他来到了最后一轮的面试。面试官,一位优雅的女士,对他的学业成绩和专业素养都很满意。在最后问到Jimmy 有没有做过兼职工作时,Jimmy 说他从没有做过。他在一岁时就失去了父亲,一直由做洗衣工的母亲抚养大。在得知Jimmy既没有做过兼职工作,也没有帮助母亲洗过衣服,并且看了Jimmy 从没有做过家务的光滑完美的双手后,面试官让Jimmy 回家给母亲洗手。 1. 段落续写:(1)第一段句首内容 “回到家,Jimmy 请求他的母亲让他给她洗手。” 可知,第一段可描写Jimmy 第一次看到母亲粗糙沧桑的双手的意外和震惊,(与他光滑完美的手起反衬的对比)以及带给他内心和行为上的变化。(2)第二段句首内容 “第二天早上Jimmy 来到面试官的办公室。” 可知,第二段可描写Jimmy 见到面试官后,讲述自己帮妈妈洗手后带给他思想上的觉醒和内心的感悟。同时感谢面试官让他认识到妈妈为他付出的一切。主旨升华积极的生活态度和价值取向,给故事呈现完美结局。 2. 续写线索:母亲感到奇怪——发现母亲粗糙沧桑的双手——内心无比震撼——帮做家务——母子深入交流——跟面试官分享自己的感悟——被录取高分句型1Without her, I would not be successful today. (运用了虚拟语气)高分句型2Hearing this, the lady said happily : “You are the right person I am looking for. ( 分别运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的定语从句) 参 考 范 文 Back home, Jimmy requested his mother to let him clean her hands. Confused and surprised, ( 运用了过去分词作形容词作状语) his mother asked why he wanted to do it. Jimmy explained the reason to her. It was the first time that he had noticed his mother’s hands were so rough and ugly. For an instant, he stood there in shock, hardly believing what he had seen. ( 运用了现在分词作状语) After cleaning his mother’s hands, Iimmy did all the housework. That night, Jimmy talked for a very long time with his mother. The next morning, Jimmy went to the interviewer’s office. His lips shivered and his eyes got misty:“I cleaned my mother’s hands and did the housework. I never realized how difficult and tough it was to do that.” ( 运用了省略that的宾语从句) Jimmy continued, “Thank you for giving me the chance to appreciate what my mother did for me. Without her, I would not be successful today.” ( 运用了虚拟语气) Hearing this, the interviewer said happily : “You are the right person I am looking for. ( 分别运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的定语从句)You are hired. Congratulations!”
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